Not quit sure
what I was going for here...
possibly talking about a specific person
or perhaps just how the world
treats people differently...
in a philosophic way...
either way... it flows nicely.
It has a positive pulse
beating within...
but it still has a built in question.
Almost as if...
when will your luck run out.
Love how it just made me think... though!
either way... it flows nicely.
It has a positive pulse
beating within...
but it still has a built in question.
Almost as if...
when will your luck run out.
Love how it just made me think... though!
Also found the original handwritten
version... and it seems that this
verse was originally titled "Wisdom"
As Long As I Believe
How many times
Can you walk the sea
Across the water
So naturally
While other's sink
To a subdued depth
And lay their dreams
To peaceful rest
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