LoL
I liked it... I think??
Seems it was created in two maybe three
stages. It began with an interesting theme,
but then became a bit silly
as I read towards the end.
But overall... it was some really
interesting spewage for sure!
I included that crossed out line in red.
Remember...
always just write... don't think!
Untitled / Unfinished... 26
Looking for the wind on a mountainside
Standing atop the greenest of grass
I slowly lift off and start to glide
Riding on a piece of razor sharp glass
Holding on tight, my fingers bleed
But to let go now would truly be the end
And to find my body beneath the earth
Would be a very sinful deed
Soaring through clouds
On a non-stop journey of depth and dimension
Approaching a castle of seeming detention
I come to a halt at the foot of the door
Stained red blood on my fingers now raw
When all at once in one big flash
The massive door that looked over me
Quivered & quaked and had turned to ash
Now on my knees, scared ever more
And to my surprise, when I opened my eyes
You would not believe, what I really saw
She was beautiful, clean, bright & glowing
I looked in her eyes and could not conceive
That inside this pair, it seemed to be snowing
She spoke no words, I didn't understand
So I reached out my arms and showed her the blood
The blood that was dripping from my hands
She took my hands and waved her arm
Then the sun starts to whisper
And the moon began to moan
And my hands were healed
And the blood was gone
Confused even more by this magical event
I got to my feet to thank my lady
But like a flash, she's there no more
By whom was she sent
Total curiosity controlled my soul
And with that and a bit of fear
The steps I took, perhaps my last
Entered my life in another time
Another year
I was walking through time
A tunnel, a hole
For before my eyes were kings & queens
Knights in armor and guillotines (Aerosmith)
And for me, my clothes were gone
I sat on a throne
Women to the left, women to the right
Which I soon found out, were my very own
Velvet red clothes, a scepter and a crown
And this strange little man
A jester they said
My personal clown
In the foreground, a fight, horses, shields
And long shinny poles
And two young men, in full battle gear
One in red, the other in gold
Awaiting a whistle, a life ending sound
That would start the ride, the fearless ride
Leaving one of them dead, lying on the ground
As all this went on and the battle begun
I realized something, something was wrong
For in the sky, there was no sun
For this land was day and always bright
And without a sun that was nowhere in sight
Then out of the sky, I could barley see it
Like a ball of fire, no not a sun
But brightly lit
I jumped to my feet, and the battle had stopped
My servants' looked up
Weapons were dropped
The fire grew larger, and larger still
It was growing closer, and even closer until
Wait, what is it
Tremendous colors fill the sky
Is this the end, the way I die
There she is, my lady at the door
Created from fire, I was still not sure
My hands dripping blood, I cried out no
I am your friend, I am not your foe
On my knees in tears & pain
My mind wasn't far, from going insane
Then blackness covered my world
My clothes were gone
I was caught in a tremendous swirl
Round and round, I'm crying fear
I see my life before my eyes
Then take off like a jet, maybe a Lear
Racing through voids of snow & ice
Then hot desert sands
Turned me into a human sacrifice
It stops, it's quiet, calm
I slowly lift my arm
My clothes have changed
They almost seem normal
But then again they seem a bit formal
Nothing at all is around me, except a door
Which resembles one I've seen before
Do I dare stop here, shit, what am I gonna do
Spend the rest of my life in emptiness
Well I grasped the knob
I slowly turn
Then wham-bam, I was pulled forward
I could hear my heart throb
I landed on my face
With plenty of style and lots of grace
I open one eye and of course you know
It was my lady so bright
Still with eyes of snow
To my feet I rise and whisper to her
Something about having some fun
On some real soft fur
And to my surprise, her eyelids did rise
Without a word to criticize
She took my hand and led me along
To a passageway so dark
I was hoping I wasn't wrong
Then there it was, spectacular, grand
She pulled me closer
Stretched my arm like a rubber band
Plush, luxurious luxury, confronting contours
Looking for fun, obeying no laws
Her clothes hit the floor as I locked the door
And ripped my clothes off too
I panted for breath, I wanted her core
Only her I saw, I know just what to do
You look so good beneath my body
Just close your eyes and fantasize
Wait, what's wrong, what's happening
My beautiful queen
My earthly dream
No wait wait wait wait
Let me the fuck out of here
I grabbed my clothes
And jumped through the glass
Ending up in a river, a terrific splash
Passing frogs, floating logs
Gator bait for sure
I felt like Tarzan looking for Jane
Looking to score
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