Definitely a "woe is me" piece!
But I really like it.
If this is actually about a moment
within "my" lifeline...
then it seems I was hurting.
Reads very well...
wished it kept going and
gave us a real ending!
Perhaps the mirror broke
in mid verse or... perhaps I
met someone at that very second!!
Anything is possible.
I've met so many interesting people
over the years because if the
urge hit me to write and if I had
a compelling thought, I'd just begin
writing no matter where I was...
bar... restaurant... park...
wherever I was when that
lightning bolt struck...
my pencil came out!
And more times than not
people's curiosity got the best
of them and they came over
to investigate!
Untitled / Unfinished... 4
I'm waiting for the winds of change
To open up my skies
As I am within the mirrors range
Casting lonely eyes
Can someone see me
Throw the line
I'm falling down again
My past has reached my present time
My future cries within
It cries
Lonely eyes
Reflecting unfilled dreams
Scattered thoughts within my head
Are lost in dried up streams
Lonely eyes
Completing lonely days
It's the hardest thing to overcome
I'm running out of ways
Oh yes I've tried
This and that
And nothing comes about
Perhaps it's me
The fault is mine
But the answer leads to doubt
I've walked the surf
And shed an ocean
Tears can fill the gap.......
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